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    • He thinks all his friends drowned. 
Right: "reflecting upon all my comrades that were drowned" l.15
    • He doesn't have food, water or weapons.
Wrong: "In a word, I had nothing about me but a knife, a tobacco-pipe and a little tobacco in a box." l.25 BUT "I had no weapon..." l.23, and "I was wet, had no clothes to shift me, nor anything either to eat or drink..." l.24 BUT "I walked [...] to see if I could find any fresh water to drink, which I did." l.32
    • he has to climb on a cliff to be safe on the island.
Wrong: "to my great comfort..."
Right: "I clambered up the cliffs [...] free from danger..." l.8-9
    • He is underwater, his boat has wrecked.
Right: "the sea having hurried me along." l.1 AND "seeing I should be covered again with the water..." l.4
    • He is on his boat.
Wrong: "I was now landed" l.10
    • He is a Christian, he prays to God to save him.
 Right: " [I] thank God that my life was saved..." l.10 

 elements from the text:

- almost drowning, text is fast, breathing=difficult
- sentences are longer when he feels safe
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